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Reviews & Feedback of It Happens

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Let me start straight from where I left it in my previous blog. How did I take the negative reviews or criticisms in my stride and learn from it to make ‘It Happens’ a better book : 1. The romance between Roshni and Gautam was shown less, thereby reader felt a little lack of connection between the couple. The emotional and physical side of their relationship was not explored much. This was a good point and I agree with this assessment partly. Even though the close bond between them was shown, I made it a part of narrative which did not express the emotional connect in a distinct and descriptive way. This I have addressed by adding a detailed scene of a date the couple have at Roshni’s apartment. The physical side of the relationship I have tried to keep it restricted to a kiss. This has been deliberately done as I was very conscious about my readership which would include my children, relatives and parents. Hence I wanted to stay away from steamy scenes as I was personally n